I know exactly what you mean, and it makes perfect sense. There's a kind of special poignancy and mystery here, and I think if it's explored further you might lose some of that. Saying that, I'm sure there's a way around it, like maybe a series of inanimate object POVs ie from the bunker, from the journal etc each highlighting a tiny bit more of the mystery.
no subject
I know exactly what you mean, and it makes perfect sense. There's a kind of special poignancy and mystery here, and I think if it's explored further you might lose some of that. Saying that, I'm sure there's a way around it, like maybe a series of inanimate object POVs ie from the bunker, from the journal etc each highlighting a tiny bit more of the mystery.
I really enjoyed this. Take care :)